Showing posts with label character study. Show all posts
Showing posts with label character study. Show all posts

Monday, 9 May 2016

Vesper Lynd Debate: Sympathetic characters, close-reading, debating

I love debating literature in my classes. One of the key things about assigning a debate is that you should never pick a topic for which you have a biased opinion: the topic for debate should have reasonable readings on either side that are supported by the text, the genre, or critical readings.

(I mention this because I was once made to debate in a university-level teaching course where the outcome they wanted us to come to was a compromise, and I was outraged: debates are not about compromise, debates are about seeing different sides of an issue; it's about picking a side and sticking to it, which is an essential skill of essay-writing. I was thoroughly displeased with this method of teaching debate to teachers, so I have redoubled my efforts to expound on the benefits of debating in class. Correctly. /Rant over).

The second important thing to note about this particular debate is that it's explicitly based off of a quotation from James Bond in Casino Royale, where he says, "[t]he bitch is dead" in reference to Vesper Lynd, who was previously his love interest, but lost that privilege with her death and his discovery that she was, in fact, a Russian spy.

I acknowledge that the word "bitch" carries a lot of cultural baggage with it: not only is it impolite in most places, it is also a problematically gendered insult. It is not a word you want to encounter with a group of students who are both new to university and new to you as a teacher. You really have to have a group of students with whom you've worked, who you know will be able to deal with the strength of the language maturely. You have to be able to acknowledge that the word "bitch" is not just there for the shock value: it expresses a deep sense of emotion and betrayal, which is totally incongruent with Bond's character. It is a line worth delving into.

And so we delve straight into the controversy:


The scene - in addition to the controversial language - forces the reader to come to terms with "cold" and "taciturn" Bond as actually being capable of feeling both love and betrayal, which suggests a depth to his performance of masculinity, as well as the breadth of his character. 

The first term of literature that I discuss with the students here is the idea of the sympathetic character: 


Importantly, I point out, their reading of the situation is all about which character you sympathize with more. We talk about how sympathy is generated for the characters. 



For Vesper, it all hangs on whether or not you trust that suicide note (we talk about epistolary elements in a different class). If you believe that she is acting on her love for Bond, you feel for her. 


On the other hand, if you read Bond's distress as genuine, and you distrust her suicide note (or feel it is flimsy, or what have you), you are likely to sympathize with Bond. I ask to what extent she can be blamed for the events of the novel, because at first glance, it's about Le Chiffre. However, you realize that from the beginning, she was behind the machinations which constantly put Bond in danger and undermined his ability to succeed at beating his antagonist. 

There are at least two opposing ways to read Vesper's complicity within the text; thus, determining whether or not she is a "bitch" is actually a great debate for the students. In this exercise, they must do a close reading of the text to flow the instances of her complicated character and make claims that she is either sympathetic or not (of course, we can't have a motion for debate that reads "This House Believes that Vesper is a bitch," because that would be unnecessarily inflammatory). By making their reading ultimately about sympathy, they not only learn a literary term and get to play around with it, they actually get to sink their literary teeth into a controversial topic.


At this point, I should note that if you've never read my blog before, I often have my students debate. Some years, they debate more often than others, but I always introduce the mechanism for formal debate early. 

(NB 1: I have had to debate in only two instances in a classroom setting: the one I mentioned above, and another in high school which left me desperately debating against fifteen others as my teammates failed to come up with any arguments. I was so emotionally overwhelmed afterwards that I skipped the next class - the only time I've ever done so - to cry in a washroom. My teacher never tried it again, and I learned that setting up the framework for debate feels awkwardly formal at first, but it sets up the necessary rules and directions so that no student has the utterly horrible experience that I did in grade twelve English class).

(NB 2: Now you're wondering why I use debate in my classroom because my classroom experiences were actually horrible. I was introduced to real debate in university, and I have since become a widely-recognized debate judge and coach as a result of nearly ten years with university and high school debate. Once I learned how to do it right, I fell in love :) ) 


As a reminder, I put the instructions up on a slide so that everyone is on the same page. I try to make the distribution of tasks as fair as possible within the groups, and I ask that if someone has debated before, that another group member volunteer. Incidentally, while I walk around the room listening to conversations, I am able to see who is participating in group work who may not otherwise participate in the larger group conversation. This gets them their participation grade.


I always have a vote at the end: the students who put a lot of thought into their work like to feel empowered by the vote of the rest of the class. Usually, it's not entirely fair because each team votes for themselves, but that's part of the fun of it for them. 

Write a comment if you have any questions about how to run a debate in your classroom! 

Tuesday, 28 April 2015

Creative Writing Prompt: Point of View

In this lesson, we considered point of view. One of the tactics I have been using lately in teaching creative writing is to always attach it to a concept of writing. I think I was largely just doing fun or quirky ideas before, but now I'm actually thinking about one thing they're getting out of the lesson (For example: character, plot, setting, dialogue, etc). It's pretty basic, but I think I get more bang for my buck this way: I give them something fun to do, but I also give them a concept from writing which will serve them well.

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Point of View
You may not realize it, but every story is written from someone’s point of view: that means that someone is telling the story based on how they see things happening. A narrator is the person telling the story.

You can have one of three different types of narrator:

The first-person perspective: the person telling the story is the person who the story is about. This person describes things that happen to them using the words “I” or “me” or “my.” This type of story has a lot of perspective on a person’s feelings, because they often share how they feel in the narrative. This narrator is a character in the story.

 The third-person perspective: the person telling this story describes what is happening to other people who are in the story using the words “he” or “she” or “they.” This type of story will usually have one person as the main focus, but the narrator will not know what their feelings are, so the reader will have to wait to see how the characters are described, or to read what they say in order to find out how they feel. This narrator is not often a character in the story.

 The omniscient narrator: the person telling this story also uses the words “he” or “she” or “they” to describe the characters and their actions. The word “omniscient” means “all-knowing.” The difference between this narrator and the third-person narrator is that the omniscient narrator knows what everyone is thinking: this narrator will often describes their thoughts and feelings so that the reader knows everything that is going on in the minds of the characters. This narrator is almost never a character in the story

(I can think of one really great exception: The Book Thief by Marcus Zusak has an omniscient narrator, who is the character of Death, personified. An omniscient narrator who appears in the text is probably going to be someone with supernatural or god-like powers in most cases).

When you write a story, it is important that you know from whose perspective you write: if the narrator is a character in the story, the story is told from their point of view.
It is also important that the point of view remains consistent: you don’t want to change from a first-person narrator to an omniscient narrator part way through.

Also, the point of view should make logical sense:

-          A story told by a princess will look different from a story told by a vampire: they will think differently about their actions and how they justify their thoughts and feelings.

-          You should ask yourself who and what your narrator is so that you can feel the way they feel: a story with an omniscient narrator should be pretty neutral. You don’t want your omniscient narrator to be too present. That is, you should not be able to notice there is a narrator when that narrator is omniscient. By contrast, a story told from the perspective of a shark should feel like a shark wrote it. Their thoughts should sound like shark-thoughts, and their actions should look like shark-actions.



Today you will practice writing from different points of view.
Pick one of the following Point of View Prompts:

Write a story about a dragon that saves a princess from a knight (You may use any of the following points of view: the perspective of the dragon, the princess, the knight, or an unnamed narrator). 

Imagine you live in a world where sharks swim in the forest, and you become lost in a forest overnight. Tell the story of what happens.

Tell a story from the perspective of a painting in a museum.

 A teenager has just discovered undeniable, 100% accurate proof that everyone around them is an alien. Describe what they do tomorrow.

 Imagine you are a fairy-tale villain (of your choice). Write about how someone wronged you in the past, causing you to become villainous.

 Tell the story of a lost button becoming reunited with its coat.

 You have picked up a rock which gives you the ability to know everyone’s thoughts and feelings. Tell the story of the first day you take your mind-reading rock to school.

Consider the following questions for the point of view that you choose:

Who is the narrator?
How do they think?
What are their goals and motivations? (What do they want?)
Why do they want what they want?
How are they going to get what they want?


Now, write that story! 

*** I ended up needing a bit of further explanation for a few of my young listeners. So I told the story of Little Red Riding Hood from three different perspectives. Not for the first time was I reminded that examples are often the trick! 

Thursday, 15 May 2014

Beowulf Translation Debate

The idea for comparing translations of Beowulf as a class exercise in close reading is not mine, but a fellow graduate student's. However, I did modify this exercise to make the group work a bit more dynamic; the students were then required to debate the merits of their translation.



What makes a better translation?
What makes better literature?
How do you challenge someone else's opinion on literature using an identifiable set of criteria?
How do you develop this set of criteria?

I was evaluated based on this class, and it went really well.

The other important thing to note is that you should give them this hand out in advance. When I did this set of debates, I gave them a day to prepare. When I later gave them a week to prepare, the results were much better. 

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Tomorrow in class we will be discussing various translations of the same passage from Beowulf. Please read the translations, and then use the following questions to help draw comparisons between them.

  1. How does the form of this translation make use of oral poetic characteristics? (alliteration, repetition, spacing, etc) [NB: I have recreated the text exactly as it appears on the page, including commas, spaces, justifications. Take that into consideration, also!]
  2. What kind of imagery is used in the passage?
  3. What word choices does the translator make?
  4. What can you infer about the translator's intent based on the language? (academic, storytelling, etc) What are the benefits of the intent that the translator uses?
  5. Does the passage reflect the model of the heroic mode? How?

Translation #1 (Seamus Heaney):

So times were pleasant for the people there
100 until finally one, a fiend out of hell,
began to work his evil in the world.
Grendel was the name of this grim demon
haunting the marches, marauding round the heath
and the desolate fens; he had dwelt for a time
in misery among the banished monsters,
Cain’s clan, whom the Creator had outlawed
and condemned as outcasts. For the killing of Abel
the Eternal Lord had exacted a price:
Cain got no good from committing that murder
110 because the Almighty made him anathema
and out of the curse of his exile there sprang
ogres and elves and evil phantoms
and the giants too who strove with God
time and again until He gave them their reward.

(2001-02-17). Beowulf (Bilingual Edition) (Kindle Locations 476-477). W. W. Norton & Company. Kindle Edition. 



Translation #2: Anne Schotter:

And so the warriors lived in joy
100 happily until one began
to commit crimes, a fiend from hell
the grim demon was called Grendel,
notorious borderland-prowler who dwelt in the moors
fen and stronghold; the home of monsterkind
105 this cursed creature occupied for a long while
since the Creator had condemned him
as the kin of Cain - he punished the killing,
the Eternal Lord, because he slew Abel;
He did not rejoice in that evil deed, but He banished him far
100 from mankind, God, in return for the crime.

(Excerpt from Longman Anthology of British Literature, 3rd Edition. Eds. Damrosch and Dettmar.)



Translation #3: Allan Sullivan and Timothy Murphy


So the king's thanes
90 gathered in gladness; then crime came calling.
a horror from hell, hideous Grendel,
wrathful rover of borders and moors,
holder of hollows, haunter of fens.
He had lived long in the land of the loathsome,
born to the band whom God had banished
as kindred of Cain, thereby requiting
the slayer of Abel. Many such sprang
from the first murderer: monsters and misfits,
elves and ill-spirits, also those giants
100 whose wars with the Lord earned them exile.

(Excerpt from Longman Anthology of British Literature, 3rd Edition. Eds. Damrosch and Dettmar.)


Translation #4: R.M. Liuzza [the text assigned to this course]

-Thus this lordly people lived in joy,
blessedly, until one began
to work his foul crimes – a fiend from hell.
This grim spirit was called Grendel,
mighty stalker of the marshes, who held
the moors and fens; thivs miserable man
lived for a time in the land of giants,
after the Creator had condemned him
among Cain's race – when he killed Abel
the eternal Lord avenged that death.
No joy in that feud – the Maker forced him
far from mankind for his foul crime.
From thence arose all misbegotten things,
trolls and elves and the living dead,
and also the gianys who strove against God
for a long while – He gave them their reward for that.

[Anonymous. Beowulf. Ed. R.M. Liuzza. Peterborough: Broadview, 2013. Print.]

Memory and Reliability: Oryx and Crake

Memory and Reliability

What is a reliable narrator?

A reliable narrator is one which the reader can trust implicitly; usually this is because we have omnipresent knowledge of their thoughts and actions. We believe that what they say is true, because we have no reason to suspect that they are not being truthful.

However, more often than not, we must question a narrator's believability – in literature, we call this their reliability – for a variety of reasons, such as, but not limited to:
  • a character who is projecting or presenting themselves to a presumed audience, so they are constructing an image that we are to consume
  • a character whose memory is faulty; we presume that a narrator's ability to recall certain details are limited especially in the following cases:
      • those with brain injuries or other physical impairments to memory
      • children
      • elderly
      • those with dementia
  • a character who is emotionally compromised. Obviously, characters have emotions. This is sort of obvious. However, a character that has experienced powerful or obsessive or traumatic emotion may sometimes be thought of as unreliable.
      • Trauma such as violence, war, abuse, etc
      • Heartbreak
      • Insanity
          • *** This type of theory of reliability should be used with caution. This does not mean that everyone who has experienced awful things will be a liar (think how unfair that would be to victims of sexual assault, refugees from war-torn countries, etc). It is useful to think about the character's POV and how they might have a narrow perception of events after their trauma; rather than alienate the character, it can help you think meaningfully about how the trauma has coloured their perspective.

Reliability is inherently tied to memory:
How effective is the character's memory?
How embellished is the memory?
How is the presentation of the memory constructed?
And how does that presentation change your perception of the character?

Why is it useful to ask this question (How reliable is the character?) ?
The question forces you to think outside of the text that you are presented; thinking of reliability can help you see more about the character's motivation and perception of self that you might otherwise miss.

Is Jimmy a reliable narrator?
Identify what parts of his memory show his (un)reliability.
(childhood memory – inherently faulty; memory loss (unexplained cause), ie he's losing his words; trauma of the apocalypse and its aftermath; obsession over Oryx and Crake – can't know if his interpretation is coloured by his love for them or not)
February 14th, 2014
Jimmy Questions:

What do you think Jimmy's happiest memory is? With Oryx? With Crake?


(Besides the moment where he watches Oryx die and kills Crake), what is his saddest memory?


How is Jimmy both hero and anti-hero?


Are there heroes in this novel? Are there villains? Is there comedy?


Oryx Questions:

Why does he continually return to the memory of Oryx in the porn film? (Where does his obsession come from?)


Why does Jimmy ask Oryx so many questions about her life before she's with him and Crake?


How does Oryx participate in Jimmy's construction of her? Why does she present herself in certain ways?


What makes Oryx (un)reliable?



Craker Questions:

How do Jimmy's memories of the past influence the Crakers?


How are the Crakers both harmed and enhanced by his memories?


How are the Crakers defined by their own memories? (How do they take the information that Snowman gives them and reconstruct it to suit their own needs?)


The Crakers encounter three humans and tell Snowman about it. Atwood employs some literary strategies to give them reliability. Obviously, Snowman confirms that they exist, so we know that the Crakers were right. What exactly do they say that convinces Snowman, and how do they say it? (What does this say about the kind of characters whose testimony we take at face value?)